space wip

[drig]

here is a project that i will be working on for probably quite some time. i have the scenes mapped out and this is the first one. tell me what you think.http://s648.photobucket.com/albums/uu20 ... scene1.flv

[Mannie]

kinda to short to say anything about it, but i bet it be great when done

[drig]

yeah it is the introduction, after this i go to the inside of the ship. do you think it should be longer?

[Mannie]

Personaly i say yes, this was just 1 or 2 seconds. But it is a matter of personal opinion of course

[Gary Miller]

I think I blinked and missed it
Personally I think it looks very, very promising. I like the lighting and the beginning animation. PLEASE do more work on it. I want to see more as I am very interested in seeing what you are making. Keep it up.

[drig]

as you all suggested i made the beginning longer, i also changed the texture on the ship, so what do you think. http://s648.photobucket.com/albums/uu20 ... ene1-2.flv

[Mannie]

That's excellent now, very nice so far

[drig]

i got some time so i decided to try some looks for the "bad guy ship". i wanted to get an organic feel. so what do ya think.

[drig]

a bit hard to see so i did a color correct hopefully this shows up better.

[Mannie]

It looks cool i think, but i prefer the first one

[drig]

i was trying to figure out how the "warp in" of the bad spaceship should go, this is the first try. the things coming off the main ship are little ships, in the final animation they would be released later not during warping.any ideas? http://s648.photobucket.com/albums/uu20 ... =Comp3.flv

[Gary Miller]

I think your work so far is just super. If I may add my two cents worth I would either change the lighting so things are more illuminated or have some invisible area lights follow the ship in the animation so they provide some very slight illumination of the models. I know space is black but it's difficult to see and appreciate all your hard work if the lighting is black.