Somethings Missing?

[arnoldt]

Here is a pic I am working on, but for some reason something seems to be missing. Not sure what it is? What yall think?

[vovka]

make moon bige and drop it down, bellow peaks.
Add dencity to clouds, make them less flat.
Add hase and fog
Foreground need more details, ground look empthy.
May be some very close up plant with out of focus blur, to increase 3d preseption.
Gradian on sky , it is to even.
This is subjective suggestions.

Over all very intresting compasition

[arnoldt]

Thanks for the info will try some of that.

[arnoldt]

Heres an updated one, I really like the way this one came out. Not to sure about the moon, just got to figure out how to change the color of it, or make a bright planet.......

[Grinder]

You might consider dropping the moon to the horizon and have the spire split it in two. Although, it looks pretty good where it is now. If you leave it at that altitude, possibly move it over to the left a little, have it partially obscured by the left cliff edge. Just some ideas.

[Homer]

Looking good. Could do with some light possibly in the foreground, alot of any detail is lost there.

[arnoldt]

Did a little lightening in photoshop. I really like it now.

[GunnerMan]

Not sure how you have the texture mapped on that mountain deal but what you might try is reducing the texture scale on the Y Axis only, try different mapping like Cylindrical for example. The texture on the vertical side seems a bit streched to me, this could be a scalle issue or maybe it could be mapped better.

Also in the foreground I would put a few small bushes/grass on the side of the cliffs. The clouds look to "milky" and blue for my taste but thats personal opinion.

Also I might try for kicks and jollies, put an orange/red light down in that mountain and make it kind of bright so it looks like a sort of alien thing or put a dimmer light with some black and gray smoke to simulate an active volcano. You could even do green or blue for a softer more peaceful look like it is a portal to another land of plenty but you must make it up the mountain and down to get to it. Maybe put some snow on to give it a scence of height. These are just things I would try... but I like the scene, it looks good and leaves something to imagine.

[bornabanan]

It looks very good. I would blur out the forground just a little bit so the background would stand out. one of the clouds also doesn't look realistic. the image is also too symmetrical to me.. Maybe change the shape of one of the big rocks on the forground so both won't look the same...great job over all!